5 thoughts on “Beatific Misfits”

  1. Entertaining Robert, but I far prefer your dialogue. However it’s great to step outside and stretch yourself on occasion.

  2. I disagree with Tom, and feel like these images are powerful and I like the energy of the poem. The only part that felt off a little for me was the last four lines. The offbeat energy of the setup fell away and it suddenly switches tone as a result. Just keep working at your poetry Robert. You are so talented and poems are ever-changing.

  3. although we have seen these people you have compelling imagery developed here to portray them in a unique and refreshing way. the last four lines could use some development.

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